NAMA           : WULAN SUSANTI

NPM               : 12340033

SUBJECT      : WRITING III

How To Write Paragraph ( explanation ) With Adequate And Inadequate Unity And Coherence.

1.      Unity refers to the extent to which all of the ideas contained within a given paragraph "hang together" in a way that is easy for the reader to understand.

2.      Coherence refers to the extent to which the flow of ideas in a paragraph is easily understood by the reader. For this reason, coherence is closely related to unity.

3.      A paragraph is adequately developed when it describes, explains and supports the topic sentence. If the "promise" of the topic sentence is not fulfilled, or if the reader is left with questions after reading the paragraph, the paragraph has not been adequately developed.

This Is Me, This Is Real

Well, in this opportunity, I will describe about myself to you all, so you will know me more about my hobby, my dream, etc. When you don’t agree with my statement you can comment directly to me. read carefully guys.

My name is wulan susanti. But, my friends often call me wulan. I was born on December 11, 1994. I live in Bandar jaya, central of lampung. I am beautiful girl, right..? because I girl, if I boy absolutely I am handsome. I has long hair, pointed nose, dark skin and I has tall and slim body. almost my friend said that I humble, easy going and funny person.  I had background education that all of in Bandar jaya. first, garden kids adijaya. Secondly, elementary school 03 bandar jaya. thirdly, junior high school 02 poncowati, fourthly, vocational high school 01 poncowati and now I continue my study in muhammadiyah university of metro. I choose English department be my major, I love English. Monday till’ Saturday are schedule to go to campus. Every day is busy day to me. But, although I has busy day I always do my hobby. My hobby is listen to the music and sing a song. Wherever, whenever I always do it. When there is no lecturer I always sing a song or  listen music to refresh my mind. For me music is my life. Music can make me enjoy and calm when there is problem in my life. When there is free time or no schedule in campus I choose to watching television with my friends or watching movie, it’s wonderful. I has the best thing about me, but I this is funny for me. But, I don’t know for other people this funny or just so so. Many my friends ( boarding house or campus ) said that my voice like “soimah” ( the famous actress and a singer ) because when I told or chit chat with my friends, I always speak loudly. That’s icon for me. Actually my dream not only be English teacher but also be the success person. But, for now I want to focus to my major first. I want increase my skill in English, increase my IP, get scholarship. Those my target for next time. GO A HEAD . I CAN DO IT. That all about me detail, so you now me more. That’s real. Although my friends said that I like “soimah” but, this me.

Note :

Blue     : indentification

Green  : description include concluding sentence