WRITING 3

STRUGGLE IN INCIDENT

Her name is Wulan Susanti One of the student in Vocational High School. She is fussy and care girl. She always spirited and never give up in her daily activities. Her father and her mother is a farmer. All of her sister and brother already got married except her. Every day she ride motorcycle to went to her school. Before she went, she never forgot to breakfast and tidy up her bedroom. Because sometimes she lazy to did it. One day he told something with her mother  “ Mom, I thought my motorcycle a little bit broken “ “ just your felt honey “ replayed her mother. “Really mom, I didn’t comfortable to ride it, because I felt there is something wrong in my motorcycle, but I didn’t know what is it “ her said “ Ok, tomorrow you bought your motorcycle went to service shop.“ after talking about it, wulan went to her school. Almost a half of the time in a day she used in her school. Because she the leader of the class and active student. Her parent known about her activities every day. At night wulan continued to told about motorcycle to her sister ( fitri ) “ Sister did you want to company me to the service shop.” “ when you want went there “said her sister.”  “ emm… tomorrow, could you please, because tomorrow I didn’t have schedule.” “OK.”

The next day she and her sister went to service shop. Because the service shop really crowded so I to remained the motorcycle there around more than two hours. After  two hours I came back to check my motorcycle. Finally, finished. So, I went back to my house with the new service. But, the middle of the street I felt the brakes of my motorcycle is slack. Actually I want to came back to the service shop but, I am shy. So, I just continued my journey. The next day, I thought want to bright like the day before but, I wrong L the rain felt from the sky and made me can’t went to school alone so, my sister took her up to went there. Actually I worried with my sister because the condition of my motorcycle but, because the limited time my sister hurried up to took her up because the rain more and more speedy. Suddenly went my sister turned right ( sreettttttt… byaaarrrr ) Wulan and her sister felt down because the smooth road and condition of the brakes not perfect. Wulan very shock but, her sister can stand up and called someone who want to help them. Around ten minutes wulan and fitri took rest before they went back to their house. Actually wulan’s condition not really awful just shock and her clothe all of dirty. Her sister said “ do you want to still went to school ?.” “ of course, I am fine don’t worried “ I replayed sure. Then wulan went to school and her sister back to their house to give information to their parent that they got incident.

Although Wulan after got incident she spirited to went to school. Eventhought all of her clothe dirty.

NB :

Characteristic : Wulan         : fussy, care, and never give up ( spirit girl )

   Her parent  : care

   Fitri              : care and patient

plot                  : backslide

climax             : wulan stiil went to school although after got incident

Blue    : Orientation

Green  : Complication

Grey    : Reorientation

Yellow  : Coda